Well, I really enjoyed this. I love your interpretation of what the Doctor may have been thinking when he saw River again. I honestly don't have anything to suggest to improve as I am only getting into writing Doctor Who myself, mostly just drabbles featuring 10 and 11 at the moment.
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Date: 2013-09-24 07:13 pm (UTC)